Monday, March 30, 2015

Prompt: Sleep


midnight thunder..
the black murky night
twitched in sleep
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4-5-3 pattern

Written for: Haiku Horizons

9 comments:

  1. i love the images you give the reader. I had no idea that a haiku could be anything other than 5-7-5.
    Have an awesome week :)

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  2. Interesting take on sleep in the big city....evocative...loved this !

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  3. interesting!! and the pic is lovely too :)

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  4. still, so much peace in sleep...lost in dreamworld

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  5. Wonderful haiku.

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  6. To sleep is to dream. Very nicely done.

    https://alicekeysmd.wordpress.com/2015/03/30/join-silent-flight/

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  7. Midnights are soothing and musical :-)

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